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03-03-2007, 02:09 AM
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New Poem Quote: To Alizee.....
"This is the poem that i have Quoted to alizee.........."
"when ever u smile i am near u, sharing it.... whenever u feel sad i am inside your heart bearing the pain...." "sweet things are easy to buy... sweet words are easy to say but... sweet people like you are very difficult to find.... may your whole life be as sweet as u..." "if your eyes r sweet... u would like all the people of the world, but.... if your heart is sweet all the people of the world will like u...." "wake up when your heart needs company.. take my hand when u feel alone... take me when u feel sad... because, till life runs i will always be your young fan....." "the sweetness of chocolate remains in tongue for few minutes but... the sweetness of a person like u remains in heart for ever...."
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Last edited by Uméesha; 03-03-2007 at 02:42 AM.. 
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03-03-2007, 11:35 AM
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I Freaking Love It!!
Nice Umesh!
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03-03-2007, 10:51 PM
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dazzling
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* Mr.atra201's myspace ****************************  **************************** "Such a shame to believe in escape A life on every face And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight Tell me to react, I just stare Maybe I don't know if I should change A feeling that we share... It's a shame (Such a shame) Number me with rage, it's a shame (Such a shame) Number me in haste, it's a shame This eagerness to change It's a shame..."
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03-03-2007, 11:41 PM
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I would take it a little more seriously, and I bet it would look even better, if you actually typed out the words you and are (not trying to put you down or anything, it's just a huge pet peeve of mine when people use chatspeak). Anyways with that aside, I think it's great and is perfect regarding Alizée
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03-04-2007, 02:39 AM
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This one is correct..... miammiam
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03-04-2007, 04:12 AM
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btw Umesh it would be easier to quote the whole thing not line by line,don't you think?(how's my English? )
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* Mr.atra201's myspace **************************** **************************** "Such a shame to believe in escape A life on every face And that's a change, till I'm finally left with an eight Tell me to react, I just stare Maybe I don't know if I should change A feeling that we share... It's a shame (Such a shame) Number me with rage, it's a shame (Such a shame) Number me in haste, it's a shame This eagerness to change It's a shame..."
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03-04-2007, 04:24 AM
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hey atra i've quoted line by line because...... each line will give u the real meaning of that particular word..... so i used quote to each of the line that i have written in sentences.....
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