The Crusade, Chapter One is out

[MonteCristo]

Sorry I took so long everyone, but i wrote more than i expected myself to, nearly fourty whole pages in chapter one alone, then i realized it was too much, so i split it into about four chapters. After that, i was trying to figure out ways in which to post, because i couldnt post it as a thread, i realized i might be doing many of these, and dont want to spam the forums with it. And someone mentioned pbwiki to me while in chatroom, so i checked it out and i took about two days editing the story and trying to find ways to archive these tales on pbwiki, finally i gave up and decided to make each a seperate page. To further my release....i have been busy with schoolwork, but finally i'm glad to say ive given this my best and here is the result:

http://lillycrusadechapterone.pbwiki.com/FrontPage

Edit:And here is the prologue: http://lillyscrusade.pbwiki.com/
i will be posting the next four chapters one week from each other so i can work ahead of time now.